The pastor and his wife, who sang this song at church, suggested I try translating the Korean lyrics into English for their use in English-speaking congregations.

The reason why “that love” was replaced with “His Love” or “His Loving” to make it easier to singalong is as follows...

Those who are the chosen brides of Jesus who have received the miracle of salvation through the Word and the influence of the Holy Spirit do not look to those benefits that their Savior gives but to the Savior Himself. As the saying goes... To the Benefactor, rather than to the benefits!

In the translation of the lyrics of this hymn, which seems to focus on the benefits of salvation rather than the Savior, in other words, to the love in place of the One who loves, I used His or His Loving in place of The Love, in my hope and prayer that at least the praiser can have a view of the Lord rather than love while praising.

If you want to view the page where I listed the original Korean lyrics side by side with my English translation please click the link below at the bottom of this page.

이노래를 교회에서 부른 목사님 부부가 이 찬송가의 영역을 제안하여 여기 올린 비디오에서 처럼 영역하였다. "그사랑" 을 His Love 또는 따라 부리기 쉽게 His Loving 으로 대치한 이유는...

말씀과 성령님의 감화로 구원의 기적을 입은 택함받은 예수의 신부되는 이들은
구원자를 바라보지 구원자가 주는 혜택에 주관심이 있지 않다고 믿기에
구원의 혜택에 주목하는 듯한 이 찬송가 가사 번역에서 그사랑 대신에 주님 사람으로 대치하여
최소한 찬양자가 사랑보다도 주님을 바라보는 시야를 찬송하는 중에 가질 수 있기를 바래서 그리 번역하였음
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소개하는 오래된 이 찬송가에는 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rr6N0_Y_bmk
아래와 같은 가사가 있다.
The Bride eyes not her garment,
But her dear Bridegroom’s face;
I will not gaze at glory,
But on my King of grace:

신부는 주님이 주시는 신부의 옷보다도 신랑의 얼굴에 더 관심을 둘거라고 찬송하네요.

위의 찬송가 원 한글가사와 유샤인이 번역한 영어 가사를 나란히 비교해 보고 싶은 구독자님은 아래 링크를 클맄하시기를.
https://www.kb34.net/xe/index.php?mid=religions&document_srl=228397#0

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ChR-eF2IcjY

Translation: YouShine 영역: 유샤인
 

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How beautiful His love is
How rich His love makes me
How big and amazing is His love
How much His love moves me
(Interlude)

Even if I can’t express fully, I shall try expressing
Even if I can’t confess all, I shall try confessing
Even if I can’t know all,  I shall try learning 
Even if I can’t be like Him, I shall try imitating Him.